Nor Cal HOW Logo

so ive broken my foot. so instead of being out and kayaking and fishing ill have plenty of time on here so lets get this done. let me know what you want to see changed

Looks very crowded to me, James. Perhaps, reduce the items in size a bit to allow some "air" around each tiems?

How did you break your foot while working on the logo? 

broke it Monday but still going to work but keep getting sent home early. kinda a bummer but it gives me time to play on here. lemme see how it works when I shrink a few things down.

better?

I think so. You can center the H.O.W. logo. I was thinking the kayaker below the word Chapter could be moved a bit lower from the word and away from that big fish silhouette. IMO. Thanks for the tweaks.

here u go I also added a stroke around the kayak so it doesn't get lost in the background

Looks good. Maybe add a blade to the other end of the paddle.

Cleaning my kitchen then making dinner I'll work on the paddle when I sit down to eat in a bit.

When you added the white border around the kayak, that really made it stand out.  Much better!  Can you do that to the soldiers and dog too?

Sure good idea

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Wow!
That's really nice. 

Badass!

Sick!!! I want a shirt, hoodie, stickers ect, ect, ect

Very nice work.